![]() ![]() This one's much more a matter of taste: not sure if the line "Twilight Sparkle knew the question wasn’t about Appleloosa at all," was necessary. "All ready" should probably be "already" near the end (Fluttershy says it). Also, the newspaper clippings that Dash kept. Also, the mini-narrative of it was structured well. ![]() That was depressing, and, again, made tons of sense. Junior Speedsters as remedial flight school. My favorite bit how she still didn't quite "get it" even when confronting Rainbow Dash. Twilight's slow realization was pulled off especially well, IMO. (Well, they sort of did anyways to some folks!) And its reading of the episode makes a lot of sense I think that if Mysterious Mare Do Well had aired right after or before Sonic Rainboom, Twilight et al. Rounding it up to a 5 for the sake of this site. Sure there was a bunch of lead up to that, but for Rainbow to instantly change from "no, I know I suck and don't belong here" to "yah, I'm too awesome to leave" was a lot to handle. Suddenly though, Twilight says one thing and Dash basically says "yah I guess I'm too awesome to go", so she ends up staying and that's how the scene ends. The only jarring point for me is how when Twilight had been trying to convince Dash to stay in the 2nd to last scene, Dash had been steadfast throughout on her belief that she must move on. I managed to catch one error in punctuation and one error in spelling, though other then that it was, from a literary standpoint, flawless. I mean, who are we to say Dash wouldn't react like this if the entire town hated her? The fact of the matter is none of us know for certain, so canon can be stretched to fit interpretation. Mark that as a point for Somber.Īs wackypony said, Dash is a bit out of character at times, but not so much where it will detract from my rating. It provides a very interesting interpretation post episode 8, one that I didn't think about before hand, but now I realize the lesson's flaws. ![]() It has it's strong points and weak points. Read, and as always Somber gives us something of quality to read. ![]()
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